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Currently housed in the Theodore Roethke Manuscripts Collection at the University of Washington in Seattle, these early drafts of My Papas Waltz show us Roethkes important revisions of the poem. Roethkes variations begin with the title itself, which shifts between Dance with Papa, The Dance, Papas Dance, Dance with Father, and finally, My Papas Waltz. But the most striking alteration in the drafts is the change from girl to boy in the poems first stanza. Perhaps with a female narrator in mind, Roethke revises At every step you missed / My forehead scraped a buckle as At every step you missed / My right ear scraped a buckle so as to temper the potential sexual implications of the dance.
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